Kamis, 13 Desember 2012

midtest on december

ya,ya,ya now is December. For me december is identic with long holiday,christmas and new year. But how about now?? yup in my college now december is filled by mid test and the news that make me shocked is very short holiday to enjoy christmas and new year OMG :o :o :o noooooo..!!! it's so annoying.
well..however that is the rules and that is my obligation to finish the test..So wish me luck in December and keep spirit hahaha !!! ;D

Minggu, 11 November 2012

copywriter 3 sing Indonesia song in English version





Lirik Raisa Terjebak Nostalgia               stuck in a nostalgic lyrics

Telah lama ku tahu engkau                                         It's been long time,that i have known you
Punya rasa untukku                                                    oh You have feeling to me
Kini saat dia tak kembali                                              In this time when,he doesnt coma back
Kau nyatakan cinramu                                                 and you declared your love
Namun aku takkan pernah bisa, ku                              Oh but,i would never oh would never I..
Takkan pernah merasa                                                 i would never have a feel
Rasakan cinta yang kau beri                                        oh feel the love tht you give to me
Ku terjebak di ruang nostalgia                                      oh i was stuck,was stuck in a nostalgic
Semua yang ku rasa kini                                               and everything that i feel now
Tak berubah sejak dia pergi                                          would never change since he left me go
Maafkanlah ku hanya ingin sendiri ku di sini                 so please forgive me,i just want to be-
                                                                                     alone,oh i am here

Rabu, 07 November 2012

JUMBLE WORDS


Yeay these are some words that made from my full name :D
NAMA : EMANUELA CLARESTA SABATINA
CLASS : 1SA01
NPM : 12612482
JUMBLE WORDS


1.       MAN
2.       MEN
3.       NUT
4.       NUTS
5.       SENT
6.       BUT
7.       BEST
8.       REST
9.       SUN
10.   RISE
11.   RISES
12.   CLASS
13.   LET
14.   MET
15.   MEET
16.   SEE
17.   SEEN
18.   NICE
19.   TUNE
20.   TUNES
21.   MESS
22.   MINE
23.   TELL
24.   TALL
25.   SMALL
26.   SMELL
27.   TEAR
28.   TEARS
29.   BARN
30.   BURN
31.   BAT
32.   NIT
33.   NAME
34.   NAMES
35.   BATS
36.   BELTS
37.   BEAST
38.   TALE
39.   TALES
40.   SIT
41.   SITS
42.   ARM
43.   ARMS
44.   RARE
45.   REAL
46.   RUN
47.   RAN
48.   TIRE
49.   UNITS
50.   UNIT
51.   UNITE
52.   TRIES
53.   TRAIN
54.   TRAM
55.   RAIN
56.   RAINS
57.   TREE
58.   TREES
59.   TRAIL
60.   NAIL
61.   NAILS
62.   MILL
63.   NIL
64.   NIMBLE
65.   NEAR
66.   NEAREST
67.   RATE
68.   RATES
69.   STAR
70.   STARS
71.   NINE
72.   NINETEEN
73.   USE
74.   USES
75.   MICE
76.   SET
77.   SETS
78.   SALT
79.   CAR
80.   CART
81.   IT
82.   EAT
83.   ATE
84.   EATEN
85.   AIR
86.   EAR
87.   EARS
88.   CAN
89.   CUT
90.   CUTS
91.   CASE
92.   CAUSE
93.   BECAUSE
94.   BALANCE
95.   BUS
96.   BASS
97.   RICE
98.   CAME
99.   CAMEL
100.                        NET
101.    LISTEN
102.    LIST
103.    LISTS
104.    ANT
105.    ANTS
106.    TAIL
107.    TAILS
108.    TEAM
109.    TIE
110.    BEAR
111.    BITE
112.    BITES
113.    BIT
114.    BEARS
115.    CAT
116.    CATS
117.    CALL
118.    CALLS
119.    TIME
120.    TIMES
121.    EARN
122.    EARLIES
123.    BREAST
124.    BEAT
125.    NEST
126.    MALE
127.    SAT
128.    BARE
129.    IRAN
130.    ASIA
131.    ASIAN
132.    AMERICA
133.    INTERNET
134.    ARE
135.    TASTE
136.    LAST
137.    LATE
138.    LATEST
139.    LATTER
140.    LETTER
141.    LASS
142.    INCENSE
143.    SENSE
144.    TEN
145.    BAR
146.    BARS
147.    UNTIL
148.    LINT
149.    LINEAR
150.    LINE
151.    LINES
152.    LITERATE
153.    CLEAN
154.    CLEANS
155.    CLEAR
156.    EASIER
157.    RETAIN
158.    RETINA
159.    RESULT
160.    RESIST
161.    TEEN
162.    TEENS
163.    TITLE
164.    TITLES
165.    MINT
166.    MINTS
167.    MIST
168.    MISS
169.    MILE
170.    MILES
171.    TURTLE
172.    TURTLES
173.    LIE
174.    LIES
175.    LIAR
176.    LETTUCE
177.    LIT
178.    RESENT
179.    RIB
180.    RIBS
181.    RITUAL
182.    RUB
183.    RUSTLE
184.    RUST
185.    SECRET
186.    SAIL
187.    SALE
188.    SALES
189.    SALESMAN
190.    SAME
191.    SATAN
192.    SATAI
193.    SCALE
194.    SCALES
195.    SCAR
196.    SEA
197.    SCREEN
198.    SCREAM
199.    SEAL
200.    SECURE
201.    NIECE
202.    UNCLE
203.    SIR
204.    SETTLE
205.    SEATTLE
206.    SIMULATE
207.    RAT
208.    RATS
209.    RACE
210.    RABIES
211.    RECITAL
212.    USUAL
213.    TEA
214.    ARISE
215.    ARISEN
216.    BEATEN
217.    BECAME
218.    BENT
219.    BET
220.    BUILT
221.    BURST
222.    BURNT
223.    CAST
224.    LENT
225.    SMELT
226.    SPENT
227.    SITE
228.    SITES
229.    MARS
230.    SCENES
231.    SCENE
232.    LEAN
233.    LEARN
234.    LEASE
235.    RELEASE
236.    LEAST
237.    LECTURE
238.    LECTURES
239.    LESS
240.    LESBIAN
241.    SLICE
242.    SLICES
243.    AUNT
244.    AUNTIE
245.    TENNIS
246.    TENSE
247.    TENSES
248.    TENTACLE
249.    TERM
250.    TERMINATE
251.    TERMS
252.    CENTRE
253.    CEREAL
254.    CATER
255.    CERTAIN
256.    CASTLE
257.    CASTE
258.    CARE
259.    CARESS
260.    CAREER
261.    CANTEEN
262.    BUSTLE
263.    CABIN
264.    CABARET
265.    CALIBRE
266.    CARAMEL
267.    CENSUS
268.    CENT
269.    CENTIMETRE
270.    CENTRAL
271.    CLAUSE
272.    CLAUSES
273.    CLEANSER
274.    CLIENT
275.    ELASTIC
276.    ELECT
277.    ANALISE
278.    ART
279.    ASSEMBLE
280.    ASSAULT
281.    AURA
282.    BASTE
283.    BITTER
284.    SUBSTANCE
285.    SUBSUME
286.    SUBTLE
287.    SUBTITLE
288.    SUBTITLES
289.    SUE
290.    SUITE
291.    SUIT
292.    SUSTAIN
293.    TRACE
294.    TILE
295.    TRANCE
296.    TRAUMA
297.    TRIBE
298.    TRIAL
299.    TREBLE
300.    TRUE
301.    TUNNEL


Minggu, 04 November 2012

Copywriter 2

Sunsilk Tantangan 7 hari




In this advertisement we know that the advertise show us about "Sunsilk tantangan 7 hari" . Why the advertise use those words?In my opinion the meaning of those words  give a message that if you have a hair problem and use sunsilk shampoo about 7 days it will return your beauty hair and it will looks be strong,smooth, and shiny(Hair solution). And you can prove it as a "Tantangan"(challenge) with use the shampoo about 7 days and you can see the result, so why the product uses word "Tantangan 7 Hari"...although it doesn't show 100 % will return your beauty hair such as usually we see on TV but it will help your hair looks beauty than before.
In the technics of persuation motivating the consumer , this product can including of cause and effect : use this product or service and your problem will disappear.slogan : identifies product or service with an idea.glittering generality : the viewer is given a general feeling for the product,but not much elseand facts and figure :  statistic and objective factual information and used to prove the superiority of the product.

Minggu, 28 Oktober 2012

My dreams

Hi welcome back with me...
hmm now i wanna share about my dreams

Of course all of people in this world have some dreams..so me too. when i was kid,i had a dream to be a doctor haha yeah i think almost all of kids have a dream to be a doctor.
But as time goes..my dream is change..and now my dreams are i want to be a professional pianist and singer,get ajob in the foreign company,or may be can get a job in VOA of Indonesia...waaa :D i believe that's all can be true aminn!! and i believe my God has prepared the best future for me amen ! :D
I really wanna have a good career and good family in future...have a good and handsome husband,cute children,happy family!! hihi :D oya when i be a success one later,i wanna build a restaurant too haha..

ya so that's all that i can share to you abt my dreams...the important thing now is i have to pursuit of achievement in my college yeay :D
RICH YOU DREAM UNTIL THE HIGEST !!
DREAM,BELIEVE,MAKE IT HAPPENS!



Selasa, 16 Oktober 2012

example and explanation of copywrite




·         Glittering Generality : the viewer is given a general feeling for the product,but not much else
Examples of the technic :
1.       Pond’s age miracle : this advertise is include the example of glittering generality because this product give a viewer general feeling that if we use this product we can be looks ten years younger than our age.(not really be a younger than before,but looks younger).
2.       Garnier whitening cream :  this advertise is include the example of glittering generality because in this advertise said that if we use this product , it could make our face looks more white than before.(not change your face skin colour if your original face skin colour isn’t white,but could make it looks more white).

·         Facts and figure : statistic and objective factual information and used to prove the superiority of the product.
Examples of the technic :
1.       Pepsodent whitening expert : This advertise is include the example of facts and figure because this product shows the viewer about the objective factual information with the dentist research and experiment that only with 30 seconds using this product can make our teeth more white.
2.       Rexona whitening extra : This advertise is include the example of facts and figure because this product shows the viewer about the objective factual information that by the sunflower subtance,result of research, and only with two weeks use,could make your underarm skin colour more white than before.

·         Weasel words : used to suggest a positive meaning without actually really making any guarantee.
Examples of the technic :
1.         Sozzis so nice : This advertise is include the example of weasel words because         this product uses a word that if you want to be a winner you must eat sozzis,but             it isn’t make guarantee if you eat it you will be a winner,because, of course you                have to study hard if you wanna be a winner,not just with eat the sozzis.   
2.         Garnier whitening cream : This advertise is include the example of weasel
         Words because this product uses words that if you want your face skin colour
         Looks more white you must use garnier,although it isn’t make a guarantee
      If you use this product your skin would be white because all depend on your
         Original skin colour.(such as papua people,if they use this product,it couldn’t
         Make their skin colour be white,because their original skin is dark).
  •  Band Wagon: use peer presure to influence the consumer . If everyone else is doing it,so should you
Examples of the technic:
1.         Galaxy Tab: it offers high technology like, fast internet access.have a good style and easy to carry for everyday life.
2.         LG Cinema 3D, Smart TV: offering the nowdays technology and new features at LCD tv usch as: Comfortable 3D glasses, cinema screen design, 3D world app, magic motion remote,smart share plus and premium local content.Added a new design for new TV like slim and luxurious design.

·          Confusion : gains the consumer attention by confusion them and then retains the attention as the consumer tries to figure out the message
 Examples of technic:
1.         Sony Handycam:this ads show about the girl who has a concert but her father can't come to her concert n her mom try to recorded her concert with handycam,so when they go home,the girl's father can watch her concert. the message that the advertisement gave to the audience that we never missed anything about something special with people who we loved because you can record every single moment with Sony Handycam.
2.         Say No To corruptor:  this ads show about the boy who has a bad manner since he was child until he grows be adult person,where he like to lie.the message from this advertise is no matter how old you are being an honest person is important. so we can have a good job,good life,good financial but doesn't mean we can accept any bribe from any other people who has a bad purpose.

·         Transfer: associates the product with word or idea that may or maynot be related to the product the association seeks to transfer certain qulity to the product.
Examples of technic :
1.         Three: there's no relation between the real advertisement with a person saying something about "freedom in life" but in the end of the advertisment an actual meaning show up.and then the audience might know the meaning of the advertisement it self.
2.         Nutrilon Royal: there are lots of kid talking about life is an adventure, but there's no relation between drinking a milk and then you will get an adventure at that time.

·         Stacking : list of reasons why the product or service is good.
Examples of technic :
1.         Aqua : the ads shows the customer the quality of the product through the research of water source in mountains.because of the quantity of the product has been around for a long time, so the customer knows the quality of the product.
2.         LG LCD Smart Tv : because product is well known among the customer. because the ads shows that the product has a luxurious design and offers with technology such as 3D, slim design, unlimited  content, and lots of applications.

·         Repetition : makes product or service familiar with consumer
Examples of technic :
1.         dancow : because the kid who sings the song makes dancow familiar with consumer. so, if  consumer watch the ads, they can guess the ads is Dancow.
2.         Bebelac : because everytime the ads appears on tv, people doesnt have to see what's the ads is. but they might be know the ads is Bebelac who familiar with the ads soundtrack.

·         Slogan : identifies product or service with an idea.
Examples of technic :
1.    Rinso : this ads shows an idea with their slogan "berani kotor itu baik", it means we dont have to be afraid play dirty, because there's Rinso will help you to clean your clothes with extra formula.
2.    Panasonic: this ads shows an idea "ideas for life" which means that you have to use Panasonic products for your needs and everything's gonna be easy.

·         Logo : identifies product or service with a symbol.
Examples of technic :
1.    Converse : if  you see the symbol of Converse, you will know that's the Converse products.
2.    Apple : if you see a bite apple, easily to recognize what the product offers.

·        Snob Appeal : associates product or service with a personality or lifestyle.
Examples of technic :
1.    Luwek White coffee:  because the ads gives a lifestlye about drinking coffee at cafe or home.you can still shows ur personal style even ur not in cafe. u can easily drinking a coffee.
2.    Ford fiesta : the ads offers the nowdays city car that match for a young adult lifestyle.we can using that car for daily activities.
  • Causes and Effects: use this product or service and your problem will disappear.
Examples:
1.    Colgate: in this advertisement the dentist told someone who just walked out of a grocery store to check her gums to see if it’s healthy or not, turns out that her gum isn’t in a good condition (according to the advertisement). The dentist told her to use this product and the advertisement shows that after two weeks of continual use of the product, the gum of that woman is perfectly healthy.
2.    Rexona white: the advertisement told us that waxing the hair in your lower arms can caused the skin around that area to be a lot darker than its real shade/complexion. The advertisement also told us that by using this product, the complexion of your lower arm skin that’s darken by waxing can be ‘fixed’ only by using the product.
  • Emotional appeal: uses emotion to sell a product or service (pity, patriotism, happiness, etc.)
Examples:
1.    Mizone: the advertisement of this product shows that even when you’re  feeling down or when you zoned out because of the lack of electrolyte within your body this product can fix your day just by drinking it. Turning your sour mood into a happier one.
2.    Canon ixus: this advertisement shows that no matter what you feel, or how bad you might feel right now, you can put all of those bad feelings aside by using this camera to capture everything around you, turning your messy moods into a happier one.

  • Price appeal: costumers will get something extra in trade for less money.
Examples:
1.         Attack: just by spending RP. 500,- you can get many dirty laundry cleaned up. Because you dont have to use much of the product to clean your dirty laundry. (The product has some kind of ‘extra cleaning power’ so you don’t have to use much of it, and you can save your money, your time plus you can also get your laundry cleaned up).
2.         Asia travel: this advertisement offers a ‘special vacation packages’ for the costumer, so that with just a few thousand dollars cheaper than the real price, the costumers can get an extra destinations for their vacations, and a 5% cash awards.

  • Testimonial: using someone to endorse or give testimonials about the product.
Examples:
1.         Sunsilk Conditioner: Thomas Taw, a famous hair stylist shows the costumers of how ‘great’ this product is by giving his professional testimonial about the product along with some good facts about the product.
2.         “Enjoy Jakarta”; vacation destination: in this advertisement a businessman give his thoughts about Jakarta from the way he sees it. “It has great shopping centre, great golf course, many cultures,etc.”, or so the businessman said. Above all, it shows that the businessman actually enjoys the time he stays in Jakarta.

  • Sex appeal: the product will enhance your attractiveness.
Examples:
1.         Veet: the advertisement say that a smooth skinned (definitely not hairy) woman is pretty. So that a woman should wax the hair on their legs or their under arms to be seen as pretty or attractive. This product help those women who wants to get rid of those ‘unnecessary’ hairs, because this product helps woman to cut those hairs deep enough to ‘almost’ touch the root of those hairs, making it impossible for those hairs to grow so fast, in other words, this product makes you attractive.
2.         Ponds white beauty: This advertisement shows the conversation that took place in a small lounge between Gita Gutawa and Bunga Citra Lestari in which Gita shows BCL the picture of her past, when she’s still a kid and gita said that her face looks kind of dirty and dull back then but after she uses the product her skin’s gone brighter and it enhace her looks to the point where boys are chasing after her.

·        Magic Ingeridients: the suggestion that some almost miracles discovery makes the product exceptionaly effective

Example:
1.         Pocari sweat: the advertisement suggest the consumer that  pocari sweat could restore your ion for your body.
with their slogan "go ion" it means if you drink it you have a new spirit to continue your activities.
2.         Glyderm: the advertisement offers for the the give birth mom to disguise a strechmark in her stomach.
or any other scar in your skin.

·        Patriotism : the suggestion that purchashing this product shows your love of your country.

Example:
1.    Maspion: the advertisement suggest the indonesian people to use local product to show that we proud and care to using it.
2.    Kuku bima energi:
the advertisement suggest the consumer to consume the energy drink made by indonesian ingredients.
and the advertise shows the culture about indonesia.

·        Bribery: seems to give desirable extra something
Example:
1. Ramayana :
the advertisement offers if you buy 1 product you will get 1 free or discount so it would be cheaper that the real price.
2. J.C.O: the product offers if you buy 2 ozen donuts the price cheaper than if you buy doze donuts.so the product give the special price for attract the consumer.

·        Wit and humour: customer are attractted to product that divered the audience by giving viewers a reason to laugh or to be entertainer by clever use visual oral languange.

Example:

1.       Mie sedap: the advertisement give a humor and clever story,because there is a kids play a football and broke the windows and the owner asking who's did it.and the kids said "kita lagi latihan, tante"
and they laugh, sudden the madam feed them 'mie sedap'.
2.       Djarum 76: there's a man get a refuse by a company that he applied because he cannot give a bribe and then he walked out and unrealize he stumble and the genie's out and asking 'what a man wants' the man said he want corruption,bribe are dissapear. and unpredictable the geni'e said 'wani piro?'.

·        Technical jargon : use the technical words to impress the consumer.
Examples of technic :
1.       Sanken wash machine : this ads use technical words to impress the consumer that only with 150 watt we can use this machine for  wash so the payment of electricity could saving your money.
2.       Sabun cuci 500 perak : this ads use technical words to impress the consumer that just by spending RP. 500,- you can get many dirty laundry cleaned up. Because you dont have to use much of the product to clean your dirty laundry. (The product has some kind of ‘extra cleaning power’ so you don’t have to use much of it, and you can save your money, your time plus you can also get your laundry cleaned up).

·        Name calling : the advertiser compares its product or service to the competition in a way tht is favourable to the advertise .
Examples of technic :
1.         Hit : the ads shows the compare with another brand which already known by people,because of the substances in that product have a good quality than the other so tht is favourable to the advertise.
2.         Aqua : the ads shows the customer the quality of the product through the research of water source in mountains.because of the quantity of the product has been around for a long time, so the customer knows the quality of the product.

·    Plain folks : the advertiser price to identifies its product with common people does like you.
Examples of technic :
1.    Sabun cuci 500 perak : the ads is common for people because the price has a gret deal tht just by spending RP. 500,- you can get many dirty laundry cleaned up. Because you dont have to use much of the product to clean your dirty laundry. (The product has some kind of ‘extra cleaning power’ so you don’t have to use much of it, and you can save your money, your time plus you can also get your laundry cleaned up).
2.    Simpati : the ads shows the common price tht just with Rp1250 rupiahs we can enjoy the unlimited internet access.

·    Avante Garde : the suggestion tht using this product puts the user ahead of the time.
Examples of technic:
1.    BSI : the ads suggest the consumer that if we have an education in BSI,our future could get easily to get a job.
2.    Mandiri tabungan pendidikan(asuransi) :  The ads suggest the consumer tht if we have an education savings in mandiri,it could make us easier to pay an education cost in the future.